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i tried a somewhat different digital painting design where i used colored silhouette to block everything then i just render the whole thing

and the reason why i chose the name toki... is well it was 5 am i couldnt think of anything else

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*found on Critiqueable*
Congrats on receiving my first *true* critique ever. 8-) I have no idea how I got a subscription, but I really love it!

Anyways, onto the critique.
I love the colors you chose; bright turquoise is one of my favorite colors and you bring out the shininess very well. While I prefer the look of flat coloring myself (and IMO I think it would bring out the colors even better), I still like the way you colored this a lot. His/her hair and tail look great, and you did an excellent job on the texturing of the fur and hair.

My only complaint is that he/she is a little too androgynous; I can't tell whether Toki is male or female. He could be a bishonen guy or a fairly masculine girl. It could go either way, so I suggest you give him/her some characteristics to define that more.
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:iconzeldagirl64:
*gazes* Prettyfulll!
XD.

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The Official Mao fanwhore.

Yaoi should be a religion.
:iconlilchu:
Sooooo cooool TT_TT i dont know how to draw compared to u now

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Ta-DAH! :dummy:
:iconfira-astrali:
hmn... it seems that one of the secrets of being an awesome artist is to stay up to all hours of the night...

I love the colours, the only thing is that his hand looks huge compared to his head. Other than that its awesome :)

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:iconbluerazormane:
that's one cool wolf, and the steps was awesome

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Blue, ba't di mo na idi-nrawing si Streaks? Ganyan ang pagka-blue nya.

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